E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One
ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:
Structure:
L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.
Indicators:
Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.
L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures
Indicators:
Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.
L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.
Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.
Simple sentences - green
Compound sentences - yellow
Complex sentences - light blue
Over the speaker the captain sloth called out all the Animals jobs one by one. Massaging penguins, turtle survers, face hugging koalas, and a few more.
Its time for take of 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, go. Come on the plane is going so slow. why are the sloths driving? we are suppose to be going to England from new Zealand. It is suppose to be a 42 hour flight. Now it will take a year! THERE IS LIKE 200 PEOPLE ON THE PLANE. Now there are tortoise murderers god dame you sloths .
Why are you slow why not fast? Lets all just do the bungy jumping of the plane. First lets kick the tortoise murderers of the plane
Oh guy this will be so fun. wait why are the sloths here there spouse to be at the front driving? The plane is going down wait it go slow? dosen't it they were write the sloths get back in just in time.
Ok the disco party room will be much safer lets go there.They were right. It was safe because there was no animals. But they got kicked out because the lights went of and they had to go back to there sets
. 1 year later. Yay finaly we made it to England. W can sky dive now weeeeeeeeeeeeeee and we all landed at there houses yay. The end.