Motivation:
Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Suddenly I started climbing 45 seconds later down. It felt like it was 5 seconds. when I was going up with Milan, Logan, Nikua I made it really hard for Nikua because he is big and I was going through small gaps. then we finally we made it to the top and soon after we made it to the bottom. When I went on my own I went so fast.
I felt like my writing was a bit to short and I could of added a lot of more detail. I think I
used different sentence types I could have edited my work abit more and I think I
organise writing according to the text type.
